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Thursday, March 18, 2010

1st poem ever

everytime i see you
i get a smile apon my face.
and every time i hold your hand,
i feel your gentle grace.
through your body language
the way you hold me tight
i always know
your going to be by my side.
through the good and the bad
the sad and happy times,
i couldnt ask for more
cause baby your just alright
i couldnt ask for more
cause youve given me enough,
and when im in your arms
i feel my cheek get brushed
i look up into those blue eyes
and think to myself
boy was i the lucky one
to get picked off the self.
weve been through so much,
and weve both made mistakes
but we have to preservere
and do what ever else it takes.
ive told you many times
over and over again.
that i love you and i will
untill the very end...
<3 rachel

3 comments:

  1. Good first poem :) that a way to start it out. Be proud that is good stuff :)

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  2. awhhhhhh baby :D :D i'm speechless.. thats really good. check you out, writing a poem :) awhh. i like it. very nice babe.

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  3. Blake- thank you, i wasnt going to post it then i said to heck with it. and did.. img glad you like it.

    Sethy (taz lololol)- thank you. i tried my herdest and u encourged me to post it. and to even show blake. thanks for the encourgment.

    I LOVE YALL!! :)

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